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Thursday, 15 February 2018

Onomatopoeia poem

In our class, we've been making a Onomatopoeia poem about fireworks.


What I found easy: was making the font bold and making the poem.
What I found hard: was finding more Onomatopoeia words about fireworks.
What could I work on: Making it more long and more interesting.

1 comment:

  1. hi faith,
    im piper from yaldhurst model school,
    I really liked your poem, reading in my head reminded me of going to fireworks in new brighton or in rolleston,
    your Onomatopoeia words were great.
    good job!

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