In room 6, we have been using Mindmup to plan our writing. I enjoyed doing this because, it makes me think about more ideas and it really help me to say about it.
hello falo person name Faith, i like that you have put in a lot of efert into this. next time you could do some more writing so that it would stand out more. OK bye Nicholas
Hello Faith, I really like how you put in alot of effort to make this look good, next time you could write a bit more so that its not just bullet points, it could be sentences
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hello falo person name Faith,
ReplyDeletei like that you have put in a lot of efert into this. next time you could do some more writing so that it would stand out more.
OK bye
Nicholas
Hello Faith,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put in alot of effort to make this look good, next time you could write a bit more so that its not just bullet points, it could be sentences