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Thursday, 13 April 2017

Sam the Soldier


W.A.L.T. Write a flashback from a different perspective and show not tell. 
I enjoy doing this because we need to imagine what does like in world war 1. I have been writing about a person called Sam in the story called "The Anzac Puppy". I enjoyed doing it because it's based on a real history. The story was written by Peter Millet and illustrated by Trish Bowels .



It was a cold, freezing, Morning and It was the time for the enemies to fight. But before I go, I will bring my dog called Freda. She’s my friend but I’d found her outside in the box in Lucy’s house, and I will bring her back when the fight is over. My friends can’t believe that I will bring a dog in a war. But she’s my friend and I promised to Lucy that I’ll bring her back safe. But each time on the war, one of my friend died, and died, and died, until they are all gone. That time it was really sad but I have one left and it was Freda the dog. When we came back home, we were safe and Lucy was happy because she now could see her dog. Lucy knew that Freda had changed she is so big, tall and cute. Lucy and I have a feelings towards each other and we got married.


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