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Tuesday, 16 May 2017

Under the Rug


Under the rug

W.A.L.T write a stories about under the rug and we can't have death or dreams about the stories. I enjoy doing this because I like to write a stories about the rug and there's something under it. Maybe next time I could make it more exciting

One day, there’s a kid who always wants a old, scary, house for the Halloween house party, his name is Michael. But then two weeks later, he found one house, that’s no one’s wanted, but, people keep telling him that ‘DON’T GO IN THAT HOUSE, THERE’S A GHOST, AND THAT GHOST IS VERY CREEPY, HE CAN LIVE WITH YOU IN YOUR All ENTIRE LIFE, EVEN IF YOUR ARE DEAD. That time, he listen to what’s people saying about that house, because his friends believe on it too.


Two weeks past and that time it happened again, there’s 5 people died but, that time he never believe that there’s a ghost in that house, because he thinks it cools that in the Halloween house Party there’s a real ghost. Those 5 people didn’t believe that there’s a ghost in that house, and now they are dead, because they live on that house in 1 day, and now the ghost did something to them that make them died and He doesn’t know what happened but he thinks it’s not ghost who did it.


So, that time he went on on that house but he came there with a one friend. They open door and said “Any people here?” and they said again but with the big louder voice “ANYONE HERE?”. That time they don’t care because they think there’s no people inside. When they open door, it seems creepy, scary and haunted house. Then they sit on the one of the chair there to relax, but then it feel a little strange, they think it's a earthquake under his chair because the chair is shaking but when they stand up, they can’t feel it.  They move the chair out, and there’s something ‘UNDER THE RUG’ they said “what it could be? Is it a rat, a big spider or it might be, a ghost, they said it with a shocking face. That time they run as fast as they can to get out of that house. But then someone’s  closed the door, and all of the windows and all of the door that they can see, it’s closed.


That time they were shaking and shaking, and they said with the big, loud, hopeless, voice “Someone help us , Please let me and my friend get out of here”. They were punching the door, they were getting some cabinet and hit it on the door and all they do is getting some stuff and hit it on the door.


In that time the thing UNDER THE RUG kept following them and they can see a open door, and they ran as fast as they can, and the thing UNDER THE RUG keep chasing them, until they’re get outside and Michael can see the face of creature UNDER THE RUG, and that thing run away back inside but his friend didn’t see the face of creature under .


He ran home and he tell to his parents that what happen and his parents has a good news for him,.. and that is they're gong to live there. That time he shock, he said to himself "What if I can't sleep because of that rug?, What if they can kill my others sibling because of that thing?.....

TO BE CONTINUED........






1 comment:

  1. I really enjoyed your story Faith, I love all your uses of commas!

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