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Thursday, 5 July 2018

The key

This week, we've been writing a story. Our task was to planned a story about the key. It was so fun because I can write something that I'm comfortable with. Something I found hard was editing it. Maybe next time I can be more descriptive.

The Key to Success
“YAYYYYY” at last, it’s time for Graduation day.
Back in the olden days, I was so smart and talented.
But, on the day that I really felt so depressed.
I stopped everything from going so well.
My grades was bad, I failed my exams and dropped everything from school.
On that day, I never believe on myself again. But, then something changed me.
It was telling me to achieve my goals I’ve had for a long time.
But, do you wanna know what happened? Well, this is how it started...

When I was a 12, I use to join every competition.
And I would always win. My mum would always take me to Mcdonalds to eat.
But best of all, science fair was my favourite. I didn't even know what job to choose when I grow up.
Scientist, teacher, doctor, or a lawyer. But, it's okay, one day I’ll know.
I was so happy because I had the best life ever. And they moved me to a different school.
It was the school that was known for smart people and It was kinda stressful.
But, I believed on myself and did my best.

But, on the day I lost this competition.
It was like the end of the world, I was really sad that I wanted to restart again.
But, I can’t because you can’t change anything that has happened in the past.
You can only change what’s happening right now.

On that day, I never tried my best to do anything.
I would always get F on my exams. My parents will always growl at me for doing nothing.
I always get in trouble and I would always ditch school.
So basically, I just spend my life lying down in my bed and cry all night.
No one doesn't even care about me not even my parents or my friends.

After a few days, I got moved from my old school because
they said I don't belong to be in a smart school anymore. I feel like they put me here because they think I’m dumb.
I looked dumb but I'm smart. I know my time tables, 1 to 999, I know how to spell everything, I can read fast and slow.
And I’m really good at science. I just don’t wanna be smart again.

After school, my parents talked to me about how I got moved from my old school.
And I told them the truth. It was really emotional for me. But, They told me that I will SUCCEED if I believed in myself,
If I never give up and if I kept triyng my best.

Next day, I did what my parents said. I tried my best again and my teacher was so proud of me.
So they moved me back again to the smart school. And did everything perfectly.
After a couple of Years, here i am graduating and achieve those goals I've had.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Faith,

    This is a really nice story, I was almost about to cry tears of joy when she tried so hard and succeeded! Next time, maybe you could reread your sentences and make sure they make sense but overall, this is such a good story. Keep up the good work!
    -Telesia

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