W.A.L.T...show not tell. Our task was to choose a feeling and we have to write it about it. Can you guess mine? What I found easy is describing the feeling that I have. What I found hard is finding some new words. Maybe next time I could make it more longer.
It was my turn. I stood up, sweat dripped down my cheeks. My body began to tremble, and I stood still as a rock. I got out the paper and I carefully spluttered each word. Everyone looked at me, like they haven’t seen me before. But, at last...I was done. I slowly walked back and I felt like I wanna throw up.
Hi Faith, it's Nika from Room 6. You did really well explaining your feeling rather than just telling me.Your writing made a clear picture in my head. To improve this you could expand your sentences a bit more. What I inferred from your writing was that you were feeling nervous.
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